A Conversation for Bosham to Lincoln: - A Journey Through Roman Britain

Edited Guide Writing Workshop: A27450713 - Bosham to Lincoln: - A Journey Through Roman Britain

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bobstafford

Entry: Bosham to Lincoln: - A Journey Through Roman Britain - A27450713
Author: Bob Stafford. ACE smiley - smiley Join The h2g2 Book Club @ A20154070 (Keeper of The Treacle Shadow) - U3151547

3 weeks in EGWW on reply any ideas here.


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Secretly Not Here Any More

Where did you get the condition scale from Bob?


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Post 3

bobstafford

My own invention checked as far as I can site by site on the web, Are there any problems you have spotted


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Post 4

bobstafford

Hi Psy
Any problems I have had a quick review, they all look about right, the table is only intended as a basic guide to condition and is not definitive.
I would hope visitors would check prior to a visit. Please let me know if you have any personal problems with it.


Bob...smiley - smiley


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Fizzymouse- no place like home



I don't see a problem with it Bob, because it should be evident to you if a place has a tourist industry surrounding their historic sites .... or as over here in places just a car park.smiley - laugh


I'd maybe just note somewhere that this is your own scale/standard.smiley - ok


smiley - mouse


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RadoxTheGreen - Retired

The sub header for Ermine street is mis-spelled 'Erimie Street' Bob.


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Post 7

bobstafford

Thanks Raddox all sorted. Anything else to report smiley - smiley


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RadoxTheGreen - Retired

In the section 'The journey runs'
One sentence has Longthorpe with an 'e', another without.

'The iron was not cast it was forged red hot with hammer and anvil.'
I would put a comma after the word cast.

Apart from that, looks ok to me.smiley - ok


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RadoxTheGreen - Retired

Oops, spoke too soon.

'Follow the next part of the journey an Ermine Street' should be 'on' Ermine street.


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bobstafford

Thanks mate all done lets hope thats it smiley - smiley


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Post 11

RadoxTheGreen - Retired

smiley - ok


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Post 12

bobstafford

smiley - cheers


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