A Conversation for Tea in Britain: a Social History

Great entry, but.....

Post 1

Mr. X ---> "Be excellent to each other. And party on, dudes!"

(Assuming I'm reading this paragraph correctly):

~*~In September 1774, representatives of the colonies began to meet up to plan resistance towards the Acts. This eventually lead to the American Revolution, the war ended with the Declaration of Independence being signed in July, 1776.~*~


The signing of the Declaration was the (official) start of the Revolution. The (official) end of the Revolution was in September of 1783, when Britain signed the Treaty of Paris.

Also, the correct word is "led", rather than "lead."

Good entry though. smiley - ok

smiley - pirate


Great entry, but.....

Post 2

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned


Thank you Mr X .. I have informed Editorial Feedback and linked them to this page smiley - ok


lil xx


Great entry, but.....

Post 3

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned


The corrections have now been made smiley - smiley

lil xx


Great entry, but.....

Post 4

Mr. X ---> "Be excellent to each other. And party on, dudes!"

Cool.

smiley - pirate


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