h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hi, you are editing my entry on the Scots Language. Its looking good but just one point. I left a wee note at the bottom in the conversations about the initial introduction and how I wanted to make it more serious. If you could maybe look it up and make the change I would be very grateful. The intro as I initially wrote it is too flippant for the rest of it.

Hey!

I actually already returned the entry to the Editors, mainly because I was so late with it. I'm working with them from their end to finish it up... So, I let them know about the intro and I'll see what we can do... do you have any suggestions?

Isaac!

Ta, as I say, I left a message at the bottom of the article. What it said was:
Hello dear editor,
I meant to change the opening paragraph but I was a bit lazy and missed my chance. Do you think you could when you edit this?
Could you change the opening to say "Scotland has more than one distinct language. There is English, the language of newspapers, TV programmes and the internet, Gaelic, the ancient Celtic language of the Western Highlands and Island and one other." to replace "Scotland has its own distinct language. And its not Gaelic either."
Makes it less flippant. Thanks

Thanks for all your help.