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Post 1

GrumpyAlembic {Keeper of 143, comfort zones and vacillations }

This I like, particularly how you pick up the previous verse without turning it into a cliche. You have caught the sense of something that is happening, but not happening and the expectations of waiting.

Regards GA


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Post 2

minorvogonpoet

Thanks! smiley - smiley


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Post 3

vogonpoet (AViators at A13264670)


I like it too.


smiley - pggb vp


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Post 4

minorvogonpoet

Thanks Vogonpoet smiley - smiley. Are there lots of minor, major and other Vogon poets? Or a Vogon Poetry Society?


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Post 5

GrumpyAlembic {Keeper of 143, comfort zones and vacillations }

There are lots of poets who write Vogon style, but they don't realise it.


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Post 6

vogonpoet (AViators at A13264670)

Thats certainly true... and of course, the Post provides a fairly regular home for poetry of a vogonic nature...


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Post 7

vogonpoet (AViators at A13264670)

smiley - footprints
oops, turns out that should be used to provide...A700688

Seems the poetry in the post these days is proper smiley - bigeyes


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Post 8

GrumpyAlembic {Keeper of 143, comfort zones and vacillations }

Can you tell the difference? smiley - laughsmiley - biggrinsmiley - run


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Post 9

minorvogonpoet

It's more fun to be a deliberate Vogon smiley - biggrin than to strive unsuccessfully to be a Good Poet.

Of course, the Vogons only wrote the third worst poetry in the universe. The worst was written by Paula Nancy Millstone Jennings of Greenbridge, Essex.



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Post 10

vogonpoet (AViators at A13264670)

smiley - yikes

Don't encourage them. Was bad enough a few years ago, when some Azgoths from downtown Kria wanted to post some of their lyrics here, without attracting the attention of Paul Neil MJ and his followers, smiley - run


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