h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A550513

Just a small, humorous (I hope) tale from my personal life to help those of you know what to expect if you should fall victim to an acute allergic reaction while participating in a corporate training session. I don't know exactly why I decided to post this. It's not particularly inspirational. In fact, I think it is downright pessimistic and sarcastic. But it could provide some insight into just how corporate types think and react to unexpected situations. Not to mention reactions from health care proffessionals and family members.

Anyway, read and enjoy. And let me know what you think.

Frightning more than amusing methinks. Are you totally surrounded by automatons? Are they all as thick as pigsh*t? Are they psychotic? I liked this tale, however, it is more a Journal Entry in it's current form. Articles to go to the Edited Guide are normally in the third person, though some can get through in the first person. Also the title is a bit misleading, when I clicked here I was expecting an Entry on how they happen, or anaphylactic shock or something similar. I hope this is not down heartening, I think this is an excellent piece of writing (Well I enjoyed it ), and it shows you have a lot of promise for the future. However in its present form I do not think it would make it into The Edited Guide Have a quick shuftey over the writing Guidelines again and give it another shot Hope this helps, and if there is anything else I can do just yell Until later....
BCNU - Crescent

Thanks for having a look at my post. Now that you mention it, this is more of a journal type entry than a guide entry. I have removed the entry ad will place in my journal until I revise it to first give some information about allergic reactions, and then in the post I will include my story. Watch for the revised version in the next few days.

To answer your questions, yes I am surrounded by mindless, psychotic automotonic b*st*rds!

As the previous posting said, this entry is gone.



Bossel (yet another mindless, psychotic automotonic b*st*rd?)

I thought this thread had already been sinbinned?

I'll repropose it.

Orcus

Editorial Note: This conversation has been moved from 'Peer Review Sin Bin' to 'Acute Allergic Reaction'.

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