h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Oops, missed this. Anyhoo, much better. A couple of points; You've spelt clever cleaver a couple of times, and in the synopsis you mention Dr. Robert Marsh, but not that he is Angie's dead husband, which would make it a bit more clear. Other than that, I like it.

Those minor problems are now fixed, any more comments gratefully recieved.
I will except praise if you have no corrections.

patience isn't one of my virtues, what do people think? is no news good news? I hope so.

Researcher PSG

p.s. I have found it is actually March not Marsh so I will change the entry accordingly.

It's is good news I like it more now Hope this helps, until later....
BCNU - Crescent

I think you really ought to credit the writer/director of the show, Joe Ahearne.

Nitpick:

"meaning their was no clean definitive good or evil"

should be

"meaning there was no clean definitive good or evil"

"within the top ten of cult shows in a recent pole"

should be

"within the top ten of cult shows in a recent poll"

Mike's surname is Colefield, not Coldfield.


"The Congregation of the Docterin of the Faith"

should be

"The Congregation of the Doctrine of the Faith"

"Video Gun Site"

should be

"Video Gun Sight"

"Active use of Religious artifacts bi individuals requires belief on both sides"

should be

"Active use of Religious artifacts by individuals requires belief on both sides"

"she comes around her attakers are dead"

should be

"she comes around her attackers are dead"

"Or is it something deaper they can't see, yet?"

should be

"Or is it something deeper they can't see, yet?"

In footnote 3, you've misspelled 'Charcoal' as 'Charcole'

and the organisation you give as [no name available] is identified in episode 6 as 'T Branch' (and you also learn that Vaughan Rice's warrant number is 204 if you freeze frame). Of course, this could easily be a smokescreen.

I'll stop now because it's late and I need to get up early tomorrow. I hope these corrections are useful.

T Branch is anti-terrorism branch, and yes it is another cover story so I stick by no name available.
But the others are fair comments, I'll try and fix as soon as possible.

Researcher PSG

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Well done on getting in the guide. Of course, the thread has now been moved out of peer revue and bunged on the home page of some random spod, but hey, maye it is a way to get us all to meet new people

Brilliant.
It's nice to be appreciated.

Researcher PSG

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