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a famous underground band of Berlin

Hi Ric,

Thanks for the article, it's hard to find fault with it. It meets all the basic criteria - it's factual, it describes its subject etc. However, it feels a little... thin.

Maybe there's not much more to say - if so, that's fine - but if there are any anecdotes about them, if there's a particular album you could recommend - or even if you could just describe the band's tattoos - it would fill it out a little, and make it a 'must-have' rather than a 'good-enough'



GVI

Hmm, I definately think it could do with a little more detail... it feels a little sparse at present.

Well, it seems like Ric is another Rupert AWOL (i.e., hasn't been around since the big break). Since people still seem to think this one needs some fleshing out, how would people will about moving this to the Writing Workshop?


Mikey

seconded

Bossel (Scout)

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