A Conversation for An overview of Valkeakoski
A469776
VadersSon Started conversation Nov 11, 2000
http://www.h2g2.com/A469776 My entry.Go have a look and if you think it's good enough for the guide then recommend it!Have mercy though;it's my very first entry =)
An overview of Valkeakoski (A469776)
John the gardener says, "Free Tibet!" Posted Nov 11, 2000
This is a good start, but it would be much better if you were more descriptive. Try to convey a sense of what the place is actually like. Imagine that you are taking someone on a tour of Valkeakoski.
JTG
An overview of Valkeakoski (A469776)
VadersSon Posted Nov 11, 2000
Thanks, i'll edit it as soon as i have some free time.Please check out my newest entry, i promise it's a LOT better!http://www.h2g2.com/A469884
An overview of Valkeakoski (A469776)
John the gardener says, "Free Tibet!" Posted Nov 12, 2000
Interesting. Unfortunately the font changes and the pictures will be removed when the entry is edited. You might want to include a bit of information about the people who play with airsoft weapons; it looks a bit to expensive for kids.
JTG
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h2g2 auto-messages Posted Apr 13, 2014
Editorial Note: This conversation has been moved from 'Peer Review Sin Bin' to 'An overview of Valkeakoski'.
Back to Entry - this is a short entry. It would be easier to start from scratch.
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