h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

This entry resides at http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A409457 and was found on the Writing-Workshop, and I believe it would fit snugly side-by-side to the entry Tango to San Telmo (http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A296219) The author Jake the Tanguero (http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/U147611) obviously didn't make it too long over Dark Rupert, so inserting an addition from one of his postings to the WW thread at http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/F57153?thread=69703 would have to be done by a SubEd. Comments? Too complicated?

For what it's worth, I think this is excellent just as it is. Captures the spirit of the dance and the dancers nicely and made me want to walk away from my keyboard into the arms of a tango dancing partner. A couple of minor typos which I'm sure will be sorted out during the final edit as could the splicing in of additional information, I assume.

Hi! I'm here. *Waves*

Actually, I did incorporate some of the suggestions made in the writing workshop discussion into the article. The new improved version is at the same location as the original, namely:

http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A409457

Comments, suggestions and *mild* criticism welcome.

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This Entry is excellent as it stands. I've never been a dancer (once in your life there comes a time when you have to decide between the stage and the dancefloor: I took the first and became a musician), but this Entry really made me want to tango. The Author did a marvellous job in describing the emotion, the tension, the suspense that lies in this dance. And now for the official part:


You'll be glad to hear that your excellent entry has now gone into the Editorial Process for future inclusion in the Edited Guide. This means that the day will come when your Entry will be featured on the Front Page. Please keep in mind that the Sub-Editors are only humans (that's what I've been told ) and that the Editorial process may take some time. You'll be informed by Email when your Entry has made it.


Jeremy

Editorial Note: This thread has been moved out of the Peer Review forum because this entry has now been recommended for the Edited Guide.

If they have not been along already, the Scout who recommended your entry will post here soon, to let you know what happens next. Meanwhile you can find out what will happen to your entry here: http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/SubEditors-Process

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