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Peer Review: A87798938 - 'Past Masters: Volume Two' - the Album

Post 1

Bluebottle

Entry: 'Past Masters: Volume Two' - the Album - A87798938
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

It's a good album - true, it is a compilation album, but is a good album regardless.

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Post 2

SashaQ - happysad

smiley - ok

I noticed more repetition in this one compared to Volume One, in the first and fifth paragraphs.

A couple of typos I spotted on the way past: in the Inner Light section - earluier - and in the Old Brown Shoe section - ballard.

There's quite a bit of repetition between the two Entries as well, but I guess even without that, a single Entry would be too long smiley - huh

An interesting read, anyway - I'm not very familiar with the Beatles' albums and songs (apart from their influence on Queen smiley - winkeye ), so I learned a lot smiley - biggrin


A87798938 - 'Past Masters: Volume Two' - the Album

Post 3

Bluebottle

Hello – thanks for the read through. I've corrected those sneaky typos and re-written the first and fifth paragraphs. The trouble with an article like this is that I cannot assume that anyone who reads this has read the article on 'Volume One'. I therefore explain why this album was released and when, but as it was sold at the same time and for the same purpose as 'Volume One', there is a large degree of overlap for those who read both articles.

I'm trying to build up the courage to write about The White Album, which is the Beatles' double album.

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Post 4

SashaQ - happysad

What's happening with this?

I guess it will be slotted in as a header link to the Past Masters Volume One entry in the same way that the Raising a ... in a SF TV series entries were, etc.

smiley - ok


A87798938 - 'Past Masters: Volume Two' - the Album

Post 5

Bluebottle

What's happening with this? Well, not a lot at the moment, but hopefully I'll get some feedback, maybe even a scout recommendation. I've just added a link at the top from this one to Volume One.smiley - smiley

Still plan to write about the White Album...

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Post 6

SashaQ - happysad

smiley - laughsmiley - laughsmiley - laugh

smiley - ok


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Post 8

Bluebottle

smiley - wowYay!

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Post 9

SashaQ - happysad

smiley - bubblysmiley - biggrin


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