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Peer Review: A9581358 - Lilli Pilli - Native Australian Berries

Post 1

U168592

Entry: Lilli Pilli - Native Australian Berries - A9581358
Author: MJ - [Now with 11, yes count them! 11 Entries in Peer Review, take a look if you dare!] - U168592

Another Fruit for the Challenge smiley - smiley

Any suggestions?

MJ smiley - ok


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Post 2

Ivan the Terribly Average

I think there should be a note about how popular these are with birds, and how damaging that can be to washing that is hanging somewhere near a Lillipilli tree. Purple stains. smiley - yuk

I thought Lillipilli was one word... Not sure why I thought that, though.


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Post 3

U168592

Ivan - Good point, I need to add a bit about the fact that small children enjoy throwing both unripe and ripe ones at each other too. smiley - ok

I've found so many different spellings of the Lilli Pilli I'm really not sure which one to go with, but consensus I've found from various other sources is Lilli Pilli. Although, yeah, I've seen lillipilli, lilli-pilli, lilly pilly, lilli pilly, lilly pilly and even lillee pillee. Argh smiley - steamsmiley - laugh


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Post 4

U168592

There we go, updated accordingly Ivan smiley - cheers

MJ smiley - ok


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Post 5

Azara

Hi, MJ!
This is a nice topic--I'd never heard of these trees or fruit before, and they sound really interesting. I'll look out for them the next time I visit the Botanic Gardens!

I think the entry could be expanded a bit. Checking the botanical background, I can see that it's very confusing, but I think these two points are worth including:

--The name Lilli Pilli is used for a confusing number of plants, with many different species in 3 or 4 genera of the Myrtle family, (Maybe footnote "Including both the genus Acmena and the genus Syzygium." on the word genera)

--Lilli Pillies are widely planted in Australian gardens as hedge and topiary species because of their dense glossy evergreen leaves.

According to http://farrer.riv.csu.edu.au/ASGAP/APOL15/sep99-6.html
the ones Banks saw were most probably Syzygium paniculatum, not Acmena, so you may need to separate the description of the Common Lilli Pilli from the bit about Banks.

The line "The fruit are much like blueberries," is a bit misleading, since some species seem to have fruits the size of cherries (and even have 'cherry' as part of their English name. )
"The fruits of different species can be as small as blueberries or as large as cherries, and usually have a waxy surface bloom. The colour can range from white through pink to red or lilac." covers the range a bit more.

smiley - wah
I wish I could taste that cake!
smiley - cakesmiley - cakesmiley - cakesmiley - cakesmiley - cake
Azara
smiley - rose


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Post 6

U168592

Cheers Azara smiley - biggrin I've taken into account your pointers - see what you think smiley - smiley

MJ smiley - ok


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Post 7

Azara

smiley - applause
That looks great, you've got in enough botany without (I hope) in any way putting people off.

One tiny introduced error: "The colour can range from white through soft pink to red or pale lilac and have a sweet, but slightly acid taste." the two halves of this sentence have ended up mismatched. smiley - winkeye

smiley - cheers
Azara
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Post 8

U168592

Sorted smiley - smiley (I think, I'm not too good at that kind of thing smiley - erm)

MJ smiley - ok


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Post 9

U168592

I've updated this a little, think it's looking pretty good now smiley - smiley

MJ smiley - ok


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Post 10

Azara

smiley - ok
I think it looks great! Highly readable, nice mix of information, mouthwatering recipe--it's exactly what a fruit entry should be.

smiley - cheers
Azara
smiley - rose
smiley - winkeye You've got a 'spon' in the footnote instead of a 'spoon'.


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Post 11

U168592

Are you sure it's not a smiley - laugh

smiley - cheers Azara smiley - smiley


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Post 12

U168592

Just noticed, I meant smiley - sporksmiley - laugh Why can't people call them runcible spoons like Edward Lear?


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Post 13

Wilma Neanderthal

Nice one, MJ... Only one nitpick: befowl is spelled befoul - or have I completely run amok with your pun? If so, abject prostrated apologies smiley - grovel
smiley - ok
W


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Post 14

U168592

Thanks again W smiley - ok Have fixed that little thang up, was wondering if I should add a section about the berry used in dyeing clothes?

MJ smiley - huh


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Post 15

Wilma Neanderthal

smiley - biggrin You're welcome!
.. and the answer is yes, I would like to know how it is used to dye fabric, and who by... and whether it is still used in this way?
W


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Post 16

Sea Change

This plant is a fairly common hedge plant in California, although it wouldn't have occured to many that it's edible. I remember trying a few on a neighbors's hedge and not finding them particularly tasty one way or another. It's worth mentioning that these plants grow quickly and are eally really tall, and if left to grow naturally, can out columnar some cypresses (or at least they do, here).


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Post 17

JulesK

Hi MJ,

Good little nugget smiley - smiley

I wondered whether 'acidic taste' sounded better than 'acid taste'?

Julessmiley - smiley


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Post 18

U168592

Me thinks you're are right, otherwise it reads like they taste like acid...hmm, sulphuric or hydrochloric smiley - winkeyesmiley - cheers Much better now smiley - smiley

I thought about adding the dyeing in, but now having researched it, there's probably enough info I've found to write a whole Entry on dyeing clothes etc. using berries. smiley - erm

So I'll leave it out for now...

MJ smiley - ok


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Post 19

JulesK

smiley - ok


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Post 20

Wilma Neanderthal

Good idea.

*sits back to wait for MJ's next entry*

smiley - ok

W


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