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Recumbentman Started conversation Jan 9, 2018
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In the 15th Century across Europe, teeth were not shown in paintings
--this is true but not properly relevant, as the date of the painting 1503-1517 puts it in the 16th century. So I suggest
In 16th Century Europe, teeth were not shown in paintings
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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Jan 9, 2018
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Fixed, thank you Recumbentman
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