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pebblederook-The old guy wearing surfer beads- what does he think he looks like? Started conversation Mar 7, 2014
I have left this a while as I didn't want to appear a 'precious' author, but there are two things I think need to finally tidy the piece.
In the paragraph: I Gyve and Bequeath unto her Three Sonnes
'William never married.' {I think to properly differentiate the Williams, this should read 'William Hart never married.'}
In the paragraph: To Susanna and John Hall
'Two gifts only of plate and household stuff are excepted from this general bequest. The siver and gilt bowl' {Misspelling of silver}
Thank you.
"EF: Shakespeare's Will" A87814966
SashaQ - happysad Posted Mar 7, 2014
Well spotted on the typo! 
Those two items have been sorted for you 
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