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Recumbentman Started conversation Dec 9, 2013
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Under Taking the Mickey: No studio were interested in this > studios
Under At the Height: This wave of national unemployment helped Walt recruit many of other studio's most talented animators > studios'
Footnote 4: Cel-animation, also known as traditional or hand-drawn animation, uses a series of artwork drawn on 'cels', named after the transparent celluloid film on which the artwork was commonly drawn.
'a series of artwork' is clumsy; perhaps 'a series of pictures' (since 'artwork is used later as well).
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Lanzababy - Guide Editor Posted Dec 10, 2013
thanks Recumbentman
I'm so grateful for your proof reading and feedback. It makes a huge difference to have your help.
And thanks Gnomon too of course!
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