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EF: Alfred Hitchcock
Rudest Elf Started conversation May 18, 2011
Entry ID: A2984051 (Edited)
film-makers
heavy, and
tenure that he took
film-making talents
Eventually, Hitchcock
in the same year
Balcon that this
were well received
was viewed
his film-making
script, he filmed
bored with it;
contemporary film-making
successful use; hence
In Psycho, Hitchcock
continued without
Lifeboat (1944), Rope (1948), Rear Window (1954)
and film-maker.
both actresses [....] had
onto the set,
best-laid plans
lifeboat'.
businessman
. The fact that he gave
into the theatre
had already started
in advance, Hitchcock
scriptwriter Ernest
<'Alma loved it.'> 'Alma loved it'.
actress, Kelly
Is the match with the movie title good enough reason to use italics here?
Worlds, a Halloween
EF: Alfred Hitchcock
Gnomon - time to move on Posted May 19, 2011
Thanks, Elf. I've done all your suggested changes exactly, except for two where I used slightly different versions, as follows:
Hitchcock was exceptionally prolific for a time when cameras were big, equipment heavy and cumbersome productions were measured in months rather than hours.
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Hitchcock was exceptionally prolific for a time when cameras were big, equipment heavy and cumbersome, and productions were measured in months rather than hours.
Former model and stage actress Kelly starred in three consecutive hits
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A former model and stage actress, Kelly starred in three consecutive hits
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