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RE: http://www.h2g2.com/A331516

Howdy!

I've written this article about the Commedia dell'Arte and think it rather good.

It might be in need of expansion. I'm hoping that posting this here will help to facilitate that.

What is the Commedia dell'Arte ???

I'm afraid guide entries need to be aimed at complete ignorami, such as myself - and as such you *definately* need to explain what these things are, before going on to mention terms.

So tell us about the history, performers, current state of play, etc, etc - but DON'T get rid of the great stuff you have - just don't throw your readers *quite* so much in at the deep end...

What is the Commedia dell'Arte ???

I'm afraid guide entries need to be aimed at complete ignorami, such as myself - and as such you *definately* need to explain what these things are, before going on to mention terms.

So tell us about the history, performers, current state of play, etc, etc - but DON'T get rid of the great stuff you have - just don't throw your readers *quite* so much in at the deep end...

I agree with both of her

GVI

Seriously, at least link to your other item -http://www.h2g2.com/A454853

Though you may find it easier to get accepted by combining the two into one entry with separate sections.

GVI

ahh yes - that would seem to be exactly what is needed....

{but only once this time...}

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