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Entry: Major Sibley's Tent - A88028715
Author: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor - U1590784

Okay, I remembered the title this time.

Was there anything about this tent that we needed to tweak? I forget.

Were tweaks made in relation to the bit about the Bell Tent? I recall some discussion about whether the Sibley Tent influenced the Bell Tent, or whether they had a different evolution.

I honestly don't remember what we ended up with. It's not like Sibley invented the bell tent - just THIS bell tent. I'm suspecting the real patent should probably go to somebody in Mongolia several millennia ago...

See if you approve of the way I've rewritten the last paragraph. Maybe we can talk about Sibley without getting into the entire history of tent design, which I'm not competent to tackle.

Thank you - that looks good to me Avoids the entire history of tents indeed!

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