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Bluebottle Started conversation Jun 12, 2020
Entry: Bang! Zoom! Drone! Deliveries Going Postal to the Isle of Wight - A87984382
Author: Bluebottle - U43530
A splodge
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SashaQ - happysad Posted Jul 2, 2020
Ah! I read this a while ago, but I don't know what I did with my comment, sorry. Great title, and I like how it brings different concepts together in one theme
The only comment I had was "Coronavirus to come. Soon after the lockdown began" - perhaps worth adding in just a bit more detail for future reference.
Superb concluding paragraph
A87984382 - Bang! Zoom! Drone! Deliveries Going Postal to the Isle of Wight
Bluebottle Posted Jul 2, 2020
A87984382 - Bang! Zoom! Drone! Deliveries Going Postal to the Isle of Wight
SashaQ - happysad Posted Jul 2, 2020
A87984382 - Bang! Zoom! Drone! Deliveries Going Postal to the Isle of Wight
Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Jul 2, 2020
I really enjoyed this one.
>>Where the Solent is at its narrowest the least populated either side is...<<
This is a very Yoda-like sentence, and hard to understand. Could it be cleared up for the casual reader?
I liked the Congreve rocket bit.
A87984382 - Bang! Zoom! Drone! Deliveries Going Postal to the Isle of Wight
Bluebottle Posted Jul 3, 2020
I reworded that bit a tad, hopefully it makes more sense now.
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Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Jul 3, 2020
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SashaQ - happysad Posted Jul 18, 2020
Just reading this again, I wonder what the ferries have crashed into
I also wonder:
‘80 years ago’ is out of date already?
‘Made a U-turn’ - does that give the impression it had control over its trajectory rather than unintentionally going off course?
‘ yet failed to deliver any letters once he arrived.’ - am I right in thinking this means he was not intending to deliver any letters?
The UAV section has a mixture of past and present tense - is there any more news about whether the scheme will be able to go ahead as planned?
Excellent
A87984382 - Bang! Zoom! Drone! Deliveries Going Postal to the Isle of Wight
Bluebottle Posted Jul 19, 2020
Thanks for the comments, I've made some tweaks.
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SashaQ - happysad Posted Jul 20, 2020
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Peer Review: A87984382 - Bang! Zoom! Drone! Deliveries Going Postal to the Isle of Wight
- 1: Bluebottle (Jun 12, 2020)
- 2: SashaQ - happysad (Jul 2, 2020)
- 3: Bluebottle (Jul 2, 2020)
- 4: SashaQ - happysad (Jul 2, 2020)
- 5: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor (Jul 2, 2020)
- 6: Bluebottle (Jul 3, 2020)
- 7: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor (Jul 3, 2020)
- 8: SashaQ - happysad (Jul 18, 2020)
- 9: Bluebottle (Jul 19, 2020)
- 10: SashaQ - happysad (Jul 20, 2020)
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