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Edited Guide Writing Workshop: A87796057 - The Model Village, Bourton-On-The-Water, Cotswolds
Geggs Started conversation May 24, 2013
Entry: The Model Village, Bourton-On-The-Water, Cotswolds - A87796057
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It's a bit short, I know. And it needs a few links. But it covers all it needs to, I think. Unless you feel different, of course.
As always all suggestions, idea and other comments are welcome.
Geggs
A87796057 - The Model Village, Bourton-On-The-Water, Cotswolds
bobstafford Posted May 24, 2013
I think this a very nice entry its not too short as it covers the subject well.
Perhaps a short famous gust list but don't spoil it 
Well done 
A87796057 - The Model Village, Bourton-On-The-Water, Cotswolds
Geggs Posted May 24, 2013
Thanks bob!
Oh, and for Dmitri: the word count is 724. 
Geggs
A87796057 - The Model Village, Bourton-On-The-Water, Cotswolds
h2g2 Guide Editors Posted May 25, 2013
Lovely!
looking forward to seeing this in Peer Review geggs!
A87796057 - The Model Village, Bourton-On-The-Water, Cotswolds
Geggs Posted May 25, 2013
Oh flip. I thought I had put it in PR.
I'll sort it out when I get home.
Geggs
A87796057 - The Model Village, Bourton-On-The-Water, Cotswolds
Gnomon - time to move on Posted May 25, 2013
This is good, Geggs.
The only thing I was puzzled by was the word "offshot" which I hadn't heard before. Could you use a more common word, or is it just that I don't know the word and everyone else does?
A87796057 - The Model Village, Bourton-On-The-Water, Cotswolds
Geggs Posted May 25, 2013
That should have been 'offshoot', I think. Does that make more sense?
I've pit the entryin PR now, by the way.
Geggs
A87796057 - The Model Village, Bourton-On-The-Water, Cotswolds
Gnomon - time to move on Posted May 25, 2013
The word "offshot" is in the dictionary and makes sense in this context, but "offshoot" would be better.
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