h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hello, I'm Willem van der Merwe from South Africa. I *might* be able to help you out a bit ... what exactly is the kind of help you're looking for?

I am looking for suggestions on style, grammar and general presentation; it should not look stale, as this is the first part most of the readers are going to read. I want this to be as moving and exciting as possible, co could you please help me out?

Thanks!

Hello again! Well ... I am just an ordinary person, and English is not my first language so I can't give you professional help, but I will see about giving you some suggestions, please remember they're just my opinion. I'll try and give a good look-over to your piece this weekend.