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A Bit Heavy
Hypno Started conversation Apr 17, 2000
This reads more like a thesis for a student, than an informative article for h2g2 - All the facts are there but it makes for heavy reading for the uninformed average person. I believe it could be a great piece if it didn't roll out fact, after, fact.
Saying this, I still think this is a nice peice of work and should be broken into several articles - As you know the mind can only take in so much at one time.
In computer terms, make it more user friendly.
Hypno
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roffe Posted Apr 28, 2000
A response! I've got a response!
Seriously, I plan to massage the text quite heavily. As it stands it's a translation of a term paper, and I'm not going to do any editing until the translation is finished.
A Bit Heavy
Fenchurch M. Mercury Posted Apr 30, 2000
Massage? Why not tickle? Have fun! 
(Just a note saying I'd read it, too) 
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Hypno Posted May 2, 2000
I look forward to seeing your massage techniques, as Fun Fen says tickling it may be better. Good luck, and I hope your end of term efforts are rewarded.
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Gone again Posted Jun 6, 2000
I enjoyed it too. Without disagreeing with the previous posters - they're not wrong, after all - I would observe that it is difficult to cover material like this without getting a bit 'heavy'.
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