A Conversation for Toes

Peer Review: A4068380 - Toes

Post 1

HisDaddy24

Entry: Toes - A4068380
Author: HisDaddy24 - U1550574

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Post 2

intelligent moose (the one true H2G2 Moose)

Hello.

Started off very well, but needs some work. Why not describe what the bones which make up the toes are called? For an edited guide entry, you'll need to cut down some of the surreal bits and be more straight-forward and factual. What is toe-fetishism called? What happens when people have lost toes - can they still balance? What are genetic conditions that result in too many/few toes?

There are many other entries about toes, but they're all rubbish, so if you polish up yours it could be the definitive entry!

Good luck!


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Post 3

Cyzaki

How's this one coming along?

smiley - panda


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Post 4

Baryonic Being - save GuideML out of a word-processor: A7720562

I agree with intelligent moose. There is a good h2g2-esque humour here... but it needs a lot more informative content.

The author has been away for more than a month, but could possibly still come back.


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Post 5

the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish

elvis ?


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Post 6

The GR Manoeuvre --- a posting a day keeps the reaper away



Uh-huh-huh?


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Post 7

Skankyrich [?]

Any seconds for a back to entry, then?


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Post 8

Baryonic Being - save GuideML out of a word-processor: A7720562

Yes.


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Post 9

Skankyrich [?]

smiley - ok Added.


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