A Conversation for The eight big cats

Some remarks

Post 1

Otus Nycteus

Hello DrNaturalist

Excellent entry, but may I make a few suggestions?

How about incorporating the Latin names of the cats, both for completeness and to clarify their relationships? Also, your introduction states you start with the true big cats that can roar, but you don't clearly indicate which of the species belong to that group. As the entry stands right now, people might think the cheetah is a true big cat. And did you mention its non-retractable claws? (Can't check it while writing this, so if you did, please ignore that.)

Otherwise, good job.

smiley - ok

Nite Owl


Some remarks

Post 2

Otus Nycteus

Yep, you did mention the cheetah claws. Sorry.

One more thing: How about substituting 'women' with 'human females' in the snow leopard paragraph? That might be more consistent with the biological approach of the entry, and clearer.


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