h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Coccolithophores: Earth's Little Helpers - A3590976
Author: elwyn_centauri - U1138262

Hello. Tired of seeing me yet?
Do not worry. I tweaked one of my two years old science assignments [a powerpt presentation on the suject] and it is now much better and factual as a report format than what it was originally.
For any person wondering, I stuck to all facts concerning coccolithophores.

*bumbles in rubbing her eyes*
I wondered what you were busying yourself with. Now you know what I'm going to tell you hon? If you changed the style of this slightly it could go in PeerReview and then possibly after a bit of polishing in the Edited Guide. If it's all fact then it can go in the Edited Guide.

I haven't read more than the first paragraph yet but I think this could go in PR. Just as a quick point, you need to break it up a bit...you've put it in as one huge block of text again. Try putting spaces between each paragraph. It makes it much easier for people to read.

Why not take this out of AWW and put it in PR hmm?

Kath

Thank you Kathryn I made some structural changes (whist sitting listening to STING no less). You see, I kept me self occupied :D
Well since I may have erred on sumbitting my works to Peer Review, I was not sure whether this belongs there or not. But if you say so, I must profess I haven't the faintest idea HOW to get the entry out of AWW and into PR
Cheers!

Don't worry that's what us h2 volunteers are here for.

To get it out of AWW, you need to go to tha AWW main page (link at the top of this page) and next to your thread about coccolithophores there should be an X. If you click this then your entry will be taken out of AWW. You can then put it in PR the same way you got this in here

Before putting it in PR check your facts, make sure it's all in the third person, perhaps think about splitting it into sections rather than one piece? That doesn't make sense...I mean say...if I was talking about hazelnuts, I would have a section on the Common Hazel, a section on the nuts themselves, a section on what they're used in, a section...etc. Get me?

Don't worry when you take this out of AWW, this thread will go with you so if you say anything in here I'll still get it and be able to help.

Kath

*sigh of relief*
Oh, okay. Will do. I will change it to section after I switch the article into PR.