h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

The title of the series I am planning to write : "Wilbur an Orville my love" was initiated from the very fact that without them I would not write these articles.

The two most admired geniuses I can ever think of truly shows how great humans they were with the invention of the airplane.

My pilgrimage to the site where the first successful flight became reality will remain always an unforgettable memory filled with humble thoughts for these men of unparalleld human excellence.

Even more so because I was also able to fly for many years a private plane: free as a bird. So is my name : Blue Bird

This feels very disjointed, and thus, does not work too well as a first chapter. First chapters are supposed to tell us what to watch for. Is this a story about your love affair with the pilot? Is it about your pilgramage to Kittyhawk? Is it about you flying? You need to decide what story you're going to tell.

Also, there's no harm in starting from the middle and then going back. Remember that if you want to really grab your readers, you should start off with a good punch. Why not start off by describing your emotions at being in the first place where man acheived sustained flight?

This is going to sound a little weird, but if you want this thing to have the emotional impact on your readers that the experience had on you, you need to look at it from outside an emotional context. Stream of consciousnes works for a few people, but normally belies nothing. You need to go back and put this thing into some sort of structure, or you're just not going to get your story across.

Thanks. Thank you very much. It can not be that bad, if you have such nice way of telling me, that you are really interested about the story????

This article was and it is suppose to be published in .

is on vacation now and I did not want to keep a few friends waiting so long as they know about this subject for a couple of months.

But the great adventage of is that I can tell a lot more with photos, what I can not do in AWW.
However Love for everything is
there everywhere and all along in the following chapters.

The initiating "spark" for all of the story came from my "love" of Wilbur and Orville. Therefore it is proper to have this title, and if you considering a start "in medias res" that is not unusual way
writing a story unfolding in the future.

Again: thank you for your attention. Certainly it is a story like an animated mosaic, or a collage if you will, I am a visual artist who would say Thousand words with one picture. Bluebird

Changed the title: COME FLY LIKE A BIRD. bird