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loudangelica Started conversation Jul 5, 2004
Hi Guy,
Read some of your work.
A day in the life had a powerful tone of hopelessness to it. I love the repetition which enforces the whole theme.
Hottest day of the Year - I found dark and compelling. I especially liked "unemployed and unemployable".
Heads or tails made me uncomfortable which I guess it was supposed to do.
Blind and in a wheelchair now was very good - I especially liked "turned on, tuned in and dropped out".
I liked the above but I have to say that I absolutely loved Betrayal. That work came across as a natural way of writing for you. I loved the bit "Unable to find you, I made you anew." This one really touched me and I read it a few times.
Great work - well done.
Ange 
Read some of your stuff
David Posted Jul 6, 2004
Hello Ange
Many thanks for taking time out to read through my stuff. Many thanks, too, for your comments, which I have read, then read again with a big smile on my mush.
Regards
Guy
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