h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Russ Thank you for your comments, I will read your work today. My Daughter story continues on, but I am at a point where I know I have to add more meat to make it a good story, but like it as it is (grammar and punctuation yet to be edited). Its a hard step to take. Also, the title, means a lot to me, but the way the story continues, I may call it Sex in the Suburbs - although I think that might be a little un-original

Hi Philippa

Hmmmmm - not sure about the "Sex in the Suburbs" title - doesn't really work for me - that said what the hell do I know ("Salvation Army Commando" - oh please!)? I did like it though (grammar and punctuation aside ), and it's not really something I'd have picked to read - but to he honest, I'm glad I did . Perhaps that just says more about my narrow-minded reading habits than anything else .

Please don't feel that you have to read mine - that really wasn't the purpose for the feedback. The purpose of the feedback is that I'm just really opinionated and can't keep by opinions to myself .

Let me know if you do some more - I'll gladly stick my nose in and venture my opinion if you like.

Later

Russ

You did say!!!! I have added two further chapters to the Extended Works circle, if you have some spare moments, I'd appreciate knowing if you think I am going the right way with this and what I can do to improve it!

Hi Philippa,

It's done! But I've added it to your messages rather than this conversation - because I'm a bit stupid .

Russ