A Conversation for Of Christ

Alternative Writing Workshop: A2113309 - Of Christ

Post 1

Slartibartfast

Entry: Of Christ - A2113309
Author: Slartibartfast - U204775

Just thought since its near Christmas might as well write a poem about who we're all celebrating about what He did, how He did it, and remind us all to remember Him and His thoughts that changed the world.


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Post 2

nadia

This needs work. The structure hasn't been carefully enough considered and I think it goes on too long for the message it's trying to coney. Since the author has left the building I propose a move.

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Post 3

Spynxxx

yup, you are correct
seconded for a move


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Post 4

Bluebottle

Thirded for Back to Entry as the entry has been removed.

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Post 5

SashaQ - happysad

Fourthed


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