h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hi thanks for your scrit of my story, all points taken and cosidered, it's always helpful to be precise.

The subject of paragraphing is difficult. Because most people read these on line breaking the text makes it easier to read, most stories have been broken like this.

For myself this is not how I would present a story anywhere else. The speech thing was a response to several requests that it was separated to make it easier to read.

point taken, i read offline for various reasons, and i found the flow of many pieces of work was ruined by this breakage. this central column needs to be wider!

Yeh, it's annoying isn't it.