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A58415006 - Leadership (Part 6) - Takeover - Pt I - "Don't Panic"
Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Oct 15, 2009
That sums it up rather nicely.
I never know how to comment on the form when it's like this - it isn't poetry, but I think this verse form is a delivery system for commentary of this kind that fits the subject matter.
Sort of a rhyming version of Op-Ed?
A58415006 - Leadership (Part 6) - Takeover - Pt I - "Don't Panic"
aka Bel - A87832164 Posted Oct 16, 2009
A58415006 - Leadership (Part 6) - Takeover - Pt I - "Don't Panic"
minorvogonpoet Posted Oct 22, 2009
This certainly does sound like corporate speak! It will strike a familiar chord with many people.
As for whether it's poetry, I'm not sure ... I would call it verse.
The rhythm seems to be broadly anapestic (two soft stresses followed by a heavy stress)although it's not regular. I think it's the first line that jars. If you substituted "Thanks for attending this meeting" that might cure it.
A58415006 - Leadership (Part 6) - Takeover - Pt I - "Don't Panic"
Bluebottle Posted Feb 8, 2017
Where have Sinnerman's entries gone?
It's pending Moderation apparently - nothing to see here. Back to Entry?
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A58415006 - Leadership (Part 6) - Takeover - Pt I - "Don't Panic"
Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Feb 8, 2017
No idea - back to Entry, I expect.
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SashaQ - happysad Posted Feb 10, 2017
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