h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Due Process??? Think again - A53899348
Author: DonaldTraill - U14055342

In America contracting Leprosy will no longer result in damage to your human rights. Contracting a mental illness is another matter.

Hi DonaldTraill, and welcome to h2g2.

An Ace will be along to your space shortly to welcome you properly.

Meanwhile, please take a look at the Writing-Guidelines to see what we're looking for in Peer Review - informative, factual, balanced Entries of general interest that will eventually become part of the Edited Guide.

Your piece unfortunately doesn't meet those guidelines - it's more of an opinion essay, too much of a personal account. If you want to start a discussion on rights, why don't you try posting to <./>Askh2g2</.>? That's where you're most likely to get replies.

If you were looking for constructive criticism and/or help writing this up as a story or an essay, you might want to try re-submitting it to the Alternative Writing Workshop - you can take a look around there at Writing-Alternative before you jump in!

Thanks!