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Peer Review: A52817556 - Solar Energy in the Cook Islands, The Pacific and Beyond
Tim_Johans Started conversation Jun 8, 2009
Entry: Solar Energy in the Cook Islands, The Pacific and Beyond - A52817556
Author: Tim_Johans - U14022927
My own personal research project, based in a current and future tense on the implementation of Solar Energy infrastructure and micro enterprise within developing, second world communities in the South Pacific.
A52817556 - Solar Energy in the Cook Islands, The Pacific and Beyond
Lanzababy - Guide Editor Posted Jun 8, 2009
Hello Tim, and a big welcome to h2g2! 
You have found a very worthy subject for your entry, as this area is not featured in the Edited Guide. However well researched and written it is in its present form, it is aimed at a different audience than here on h2g2. I think that if it was edited to be in line with the 'house style' this article would be a very good entry.(See the guidelines and read other edited entries so get the feel)
I really look forward to seeing this progress - good luck Tim! I am sure you will get a lot of supportive comments.
Lanzababy
A52817556 - Solar Energy in the Cook Islands, The Pacific and Beyond
Malabarista - now with added pony Posted Jun 8, 2009
Hi, Tim_Johans, and welcome to h2g2!
Unfortunately, it looks like you've just copied and pasted a paper you've written, up to and including the "See enclosed CD and A3 poster" bit.
It's sailing dangerously close to advertising (you appear to be solciting a grant), which doesn't comply with the <./>HouseRules</.>.
I suggest you remove this from PR for the moment - PeerReview and click the little "x" next to your Entry. That will remove it from the review forum, but not delete it entirely - it will still be there on your space, and you can edit it as you wish. Then read through the Writing-Guidelines and see whether you'd like to put in the work to make this an informative article of interest to the general public, suitable for inclusion in the Edited Guide. Re-submit it when you think it's ready for inclusion as it stands! 
A52817556 - Solar Energy in the Cook Islands, The Pacific and Beyond
Tim_Johans Posted Jun 8, 2009
Thank-you very much for your comments. I agree, I just posted just to see any initial response. I am going to write a more informal version in line with the writing guidelines of other articles, and will look at the Pacific as a wider region.
Regards,
Tim.
A52817556 - Solar Energy in the Cook Islands, The Pacific and Beyond
Lanzababy - Guide Editor Posted Jun 8, 2009
I'll look forward to seeing the finished results
A52817556 - Solar Energy in the Cook Islands, The Pacific and Beyond
Tim_Johans Posted Jun 8, 2009
Please note that I am "only" 19 years old studying at University in New Zealand at an advanced level with A+ on all work and assignments. Just thought I better let everyone know that I am not a for-profit organisation.
Regards,
Tim.
A52817556 - Solar Energy in the Cook Islands, The Pacific and Beyond
Malabarista - now with added pony Posted Jun 8, 2009
I'm a student myself. That doesn't mean I advertise myself 
Good luck with this. Maybe you can dumb it down enough for us mere mortals 
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