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activecathy Started conversation Jun 4, 2009
Hey Kuschelkatze! 
The subject of your essay is very interesting, because I've never heard about these micro chips for humans. I appreciate your well-structured essay, however I would change the fifth and the fourth paragraph. In my opinion this will make your article more coherent, but it's up to you. You have a fluently writing style and I like the questions in your article, which address the reader directly.
All in All, congratulations to a rather interesting, informative and excellent researched article!
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