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Paolo77- What the crocodile hat was that? someone needs to snowflake that teapot! Started conversation Jan 5, 2009
Entry: An abused solution - A45201584
Author: Paolo77 - U13756346
An abused solution.
For then the void is filled and the guilt and fear runs deep,
the liquid calls it out to play and taunts you as you weep.
Clutching at your being the watchers they despise,
so the bottle fills itself again, returns to drink upon your cries.
Shadows take on form and dance across your tongue,
releasing all your anguish like the bullet leaves the gun.
No emotional tournique with which to help you stem,
With sunrise comes another day. Why not do it all again?
Paolo77
A45201584 - An abused solution
AlexAshman Posted May 19, 2009
Hi there Paolo
This is the Edited Guide Writing Workshop, which means pieces here should be intended for the Edited Guide but in need of a little help from other Researchers. Your piece is clearly poetry, and you'd get a greater audience if you submit it to the Alternative Writing Workshop (<./>Writing-Alternative/.>
instead.
Alex 
A45201584 - An abused solution
*rosie* Surreptitiously Asphyxiated Posted Jul 1, 2009
Aww Paulo I had no idea you had such a way with words!! 
haha *glomps and bites* I have invaded your other place no, I promise I wont stay. I am just bored.. >.> meh...
What is this smiley Paulo? It confuses me!! O_O
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Bluebottle Posted Jul 24, 2012
I suggest Back to Entry as the author has 
ed and this is a poem, not an article.
Good poem, though.
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Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky. Posted Jul 24, 2012
Yeah, I like it too, but Back to Entry is probably best 
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Edited Guide Writing Workshop: A45201584 - An abused solution
- 1: Paolo77- What the crocodile hat was that? someone needs to snowflake that teapot! (Jan 5, 2009)
- 2: AlexAshman (May 19, 2009)
- 3: AlexAshman (May 19, 2009)
- 4: AlexAshman (Jun 30, 2009)
- 5: *rosie* Surreptitiously Asphyxiated (Jul 1, 2009)
- 6: Bluebottle (Jul 24, 2012)
- 7: Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky. (Jul 24, 2012)
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