h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Light Speed and its Affects - A1008541
Author: Researcher WizzKid - U205454

Please help me improve this!

I'll try to comment more later, but, for now, here's my :

- In this context it's "... its Effects"!

- Also, at some point in the entry, you need to define the speed of light: 299,792,458 m/s IIRC.


RhoMuNuQ

Just a couple of comments from me.

Firstly I think you have to decide what it is you want from this piece. Do you want the reader to formulate their own opinions ardo you wish t put across your 'Infinite mass hypothesis as the be all and end all of this? I was getting mixed messages about this.

I also agree with rho that some scientific fact needs to be added, such as the Speed of light. Perhaps try using a mathematical proof of the E=MC2 equation to prove your hypothesis. (this wold also prove that infinite energy would need to be expended to get to infinite mass, since C2 is a constant)

Perhaps a side note to Einstein in this as well


But those are just sggestions, feel free to ignore them if you wish

KJ