A Conversation for My friend's engineering Assignment

Whoah

Post 1

Jim the Wonder Llama (back from yonder)

Hmmmmm, yes, I totally agree.
You mean to say you typed this out for a friend? Or was it a cut-n-paste job?


Whoah

Post 2

SMURF

I take it your friend wanted some feedback on this. Firstly, it would be easier to read if you broke it up a bit. Use at the start and at the end of paragraphs. Otherwise it seems to be well thought out and includes a lot of relevant material.
If I am right in my thinking, what you call SQC is also known as SPC Statistical Process Control.
Your friend may be interested in the work I am involved in - designing a Control System Processor.


Whoah

Post 3

Ac-1D

No my friend had to provide references, so rather than make them up, I just cut'n'pasted it and then he used h2g2 in his references. Since his teachers don't check anyway.

this has been yet another fiendish scam by Ac-1D & Vosper.


Whoah

Post 4

Ac-1D

But I'll give him your feedback because it does sound like a part of the area his work is in. His applies to quality control of a manufacturing area. So thx.

PS I did know about the blah blah bizzo, but it was so late at nite that I was helping him work on it that I just could not be flummoxed!!


Whoah

Post 5

SMURF

Ok, I'm sorry to have told you stuff you already know.
The idea of using h2g2 as a reference is appealing and one I may have to myself one day if I can ever get the damn chip to work!


Whoah

Post 6

Ac-1D

right o.


Whoah

Post 7

vaguely safe

This could definitly use some breaking-up, like paragraphs with headings. Also, how about an introduction? Even just a title?


Whoah

Post 8

Ac-1D

You're a demanding sod aren't you!!!


Whoah

Post 9

Jim the Wonder Llama (back from yonder)

Oh, come on! The world is full of 'em smiley - winkeye


Whoah

Post 10

Ac-1D

Oh I know!! You wouldn't believe me if I told you, Jim. The things I have to put up with around here!!! Next thing you know my boss will be expecting me to do some work or something!!!!


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