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Entry ID: A1913401
Judge Mental Started conversation Sep 26, 2008
Hello Editors/curators!
I wrote this article a while ago (2003 - wow), and was quite pleased with it at the time! It was edited - with very few changes (thanks!) - and put into the guide quickly.
Over the years it's attracted two types of comments - tourists recognise and like the article, Bangkok residents hate it. The overall impression is that it's a good article, but only if you're a "hitch-hiker" - which is the target audience of the article.
Hopefully, with a couple of small changes, we can remove some of the anger from the dicussion conversations!
Could the first sentence be changed to "If you're a tourist in Bangkok, Thailand, here is some advice about taxis."?
Secondly, under "General Principles", could the first line be changed to "Once he has ascertained that you are a green tourist, some taxi drivers, no matter what sort of vehicle they drives, will increase the estimated journey cost by at least double. " ?
Hopefully these changes will please the residents, without losing the heart of the article.
Hope this is OK for consideration.
Kind regards,
Judge
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