A Conversation for The Isle of Wight Beer and Buses Weekend

Peer Review: A87905541 - The Isle of Wight Beer and Buses Weekend

Post 1

Bluebottle

Entry: The Isle of Wight Beer and Buses Weekend - A87905541
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

Hopefully this'll get to the front page in time for 2019.smiley - bussmiley - ale

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A87905541 - The Isle of Wight Beer and Buses Weekend

Post 2

bobstafford

Well it should be on the front page soon, excellent entry it sounds like an wonderful event.

Well done smiley - applausesmiley - cheers


A87905541 - The Isle of Wight Beer and Buses Weekend

Post 3

SashaQ - happysad

Excellent summary of the event, and great photos too smiley - ok This will soon be ready to park itself into the Edited Guide smiley - ok

Just a couple of little questions:

smiley - ale "The Isle of Wight has 322 members of CAMRA who help organise the event, with over 90 pubs and licensed premises participating. 22 pubs on the Isle of Wight are listed in the 2019 CAMRA Good Beer Guide."

The number 322 seems a bit too precise here. Does this mean that some pubs had to get Real Ale specially for the event?

smiley - bus "The youngest exhibit is an open-top 1993 Leyland Olympian that offered a 4-hour round-the-Island hop-on/hop-off tour a century later"

This reads funny, but I see the bus offered a tour a century after the stagecoach did smiley - ok

smiley - orib "the four members of the double-decker fleet preserved in the Isle of Wight Bus Museum were reunited by the three members owned privately." - reunited with?

smiley - cheers


A87905541 - The Isle of Wight Beer and Buses Weekend

Post 4

Bluebottle

Thanks for the recent read-through.smiley - ok

I've reworded that section to 'over 300' and hopefully explained the Good Beer Guide more, as well as tweaking the other two sentences.

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Post 6

SashaQ - happysad

Congratulations! smiley - cheers


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