h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

i'm proposing an organically sprawling story. sentences and corrective, as well as retrospective (a la Oulton Gorge) posting is welcomed.

i think adding as much or as little as you wish, with a maximum of 1 (sensible)sentence at a time.

any more suggestions before kick-off?

So we can have a actual full-stop sentences, do we have any rules for a cut off point

perhapsone rule would be to point out where a retrospective change has taken place since it may be hard to see the change when the story grows to several sentences

yip, good idea, retrospective changes should be notified.

i think (hope) we can all be fairly sensible about the length of the sentences(i take it thats what you were referring to Simetra?) might have to sorta make it up as we go along?

anything else?

Robyn?

Tighten your belt, tie your shoelaces, wash behind your ears and have you got enough money to call me if there's a problem?

A favourite phrase his mother would often spout as he was readying himself for a typical Friday night out was :

"Tighten your belt, tie your shoelaces, wash behind your ears and have you got enough money to call me if there's a problem?"

A favourite phrase his mother would often spout as he was readying himself for a typical Friday night out was :

"Tighten your pinny, take a spare belt, tie your shoelaces, wash behind your ears and have you got enough money to call me if there's a problem?"

A favourite phrase his mother would often spout as he was readying himself for a typical Friday night out was :

"Tighten your pinny, take a spare belt, tie your shoelaces, wash behind your ears and have you got enough money to call me if there's a problem?"

More often than not,

A favourite phrase his mother would often spout as he was readying himself for a typical Friday night out was :

"Tighten your pinny, take a spare belt, tie your shoelaces, wash behind your ears and have you got enough money to call me if there's a problem?"

More often than not, he had a mobile phone on a contract she was paying, his pinny was well and truly in the closet and his shoes had buckles anyway, making her mostly redundant...

Just a thought.

Before you go too far with this, it occurs to me that it is going to take up rather a lot of memory/space as it grows. Would it be better - if it was done as an entry in its own right with editing rights to just those invited to play?

Life was hard for young Kim Jong Il.

A favourite phrase his mother would often spout as he was readying himself for a typical Friday night out was :

"Tighten your pinny, take a spare belt, tie your shoelaces, wash behind your ears and have you got enough money to call me if there's a problem?"

More often than not, he had a mobile phone on a contract she was paying, his pinny was well and truly in the closet and his shoes had buckles anyway, making her mostly redundant...

ah. didnt see your post grumpy... sorry... yes, ok it might be a better idea....

Its your party!

I enjoy our C G games, it's a nice diversion while I'm working at my MAC, but not sure if I have the time or inclination to play this version, although I will watch with interest and maybe add the odd contribution