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anything else on the Northern crown?

Entry: Northern Crown( Coronae Borealis) - A7783941
Author: Shagbark - U170775

Yes, could you change the title to conform to all the other constellation titles please?

I am changing Corona Borealis and Sagitarius. I presume someone will change Pisces, Pictor, and Triangulum.

You presume correctly, all the pending constellation titles will eventually conform

Anything else

For the Welsh myth bit, I would like a brief description (in a footnote?) about who Arianrhod was.

But that's my only quibble...

Footnote included

Could you put a tag before and a close after in the Table of Stars section.

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The code you have used looks odd to read on the page, I suggest remove the tag in the middle, see if that helps.

Eliza E. Hewitt = Eliza E Hewitt

Welsh mythology connects it with the palace of Arianrhod According to the Mabinogion


Arionrhod was the sister of Gwydion and hade a castle near Dinas Dinille.


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Could you change it to:

Welsh mythology connects it with the palace of ArianrhodAccording to the Mabinogion Arionrhod was the sister of Gwydion and hade a castle near Dinas Dinille..

What does "hade" mean?

Footnote 2: Genesis 3:15-The Bible (doesn't need "The Bible" but does need punctuating).

Footnotes 4,5 and 7 need punctuating.

Trilling,R (space required after the comma)

Could you look at the Extra Solar Planets section, the header should be Extrasolar and your first planet "Rho The search" needs punctuating.

It has a Jupiter size planet orbiting
about 0.22 AU Astronomical Units.
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You should put the footnote up against what you are footnoting, or it hangs loose in the text. Move up the text in the footnote to the footnote tag, thus:
It has a Jupiter size planet orbiting about 0.22 AUAstronomical Units.

I had a little ttrouble with the system parsing. I would make some small change like correcting hade to had and it would look right in preview but pop back to the original when I went to update.
so I can see I still have a bit to do here.

A7783941

Is that better?

Your second para needs a full-stop.

Footnote two is still hanging wide of the text (it needs to be next to the last word of the footnote, before any punctuation)

Footnote three, ditto.

Under "Superstar"
<>
That is going to be meaningless to the ordinary reader and requires some kind of explanation (not another footnote, write something explaining what you mean immediately after it)

<>
space after comma
The star you mention should be written in full, not short form, in the text.

There is a star, however, T Coronae Borealis which

and also I can't find it in your star table if you're going to talk about it in the text it needs to be in the table, don't you think?

Under the Header Extrasolar planets it still says "Rho The search" which is wrong.
It needs to be like the others you mention, with Rho on a separate line.

Kappa
in 2007 it (needs to start with a capital letter)

Footnote seven, you still need a space inserting after the comma between D Trilling,R Brown

Footnote three the link is overhanging; could you try again? There should be no spaces in the link. Then a space before the next word after

In the Pisces entry you told me there was no need to mention "The Bible" when quoting the Bible. Yet still you have <> as footnote two.

A little two for one sale:
I added two novas to the end of my star table

Anything else?

At the risk of repeating myself:

Extrasolar Planets >>>

Rho >>> It has a Jupiter size planet orbiting about 0.22 AU6 (add a full-stop)

Kappa >>> in 2007 *In*

Footnote two (add a full-stop)

There is a star,however, T Coronae Borealis
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put a space after the comma

The last eruptions were in 1866 and 1946 So anytime now we might see this nova changing the appearance of the crown.
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if that is meant to be sentences then add a full-stop after 1946. If it's meant to be one sentence, change "So" to "so"

Some speculate that this is a White Dwarf
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white dwarf

They are however far enough apart that no matter is physically transferrred
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transferred

A Christian myth might equate it to the crown of the believer in Heaven rising above Serpens Caput (the head of the snake2.
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There's a large gap between "Heaven" and "rising" and you have an open-bracket in that sentence but no close-bracket.

At the moment it is only visible with a large telescope,but has been known to be magnitude 1.35 during eruptions.
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space required after the comma.

More on this Greek mythology can be read at Greek myth
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requires a full-stop.

at a distance of 2.7 AU
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at a distance of 2.7 AU (add a full-stop)

The title should be:

Constellations: Corona Borealis - 'the Northern Crown'

done.

anything else ------

I am thinking today of that beautiful land I will reach when the sun goeth down.
When, through wonderful grace, by my Savior I'll stand, should there be any stars in my crown.