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Peer Review: A62197220 - Cuttlefish: Sepia Officinalis

Post 1

Lanzababy - Guide Editor

Entry: Cuttlefish: Sepia Officinalis - A62197220
Author: lanzababy - Pirate - Scout - adrift on life's ocean - U10790805

Another Flea Market Rescue,

Here is the original thread A3431170, as you can see there wasn't very much of it to begin with.

smiley - elf Lanzababy


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Post 2

BMT

Looks like a good rescue Lanzababy. Just had a quick read for now just one item stood out.

""Cuttlefish also possess an ink sac, containing a very dark brown liquid which is used as for defence.""

A wayward 'as' in there me thinks. Or would it be better to phrase it:-

*a very dark brown liquid which is used as a defence mechanism.*


smiley - cat


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Post 3

Lanzababy - Guide Editor

Well spotted BMT smiley - ta One's eyes see what you tell them to expect after a while smiley - cdouble

smiley - biro wayward 'as' sorted!


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Post 4

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Good rescue lanzababysmiley - ok

Have a peek at A44196997 I'm sure it'll be OK for the BLOB code to be copied from that entry and popped onto this one...

GB
smiley - galaxysmiley - diva


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Post 5

Lanzababy - Guide Editor

Oooh! smiley - bigeyes

Thanks for the heads up and also, I shall link to your Camouflage entry as well - I missed that one!


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Post 6

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

If you do decide to use it, please credit the photographer Foxwing; the code you can copy from my camouflage entrysmiley - ok


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Post 7

Lanzababy - Guide Editor

Will do - Can I put in a Blob at this stage?


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Post 8

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

There was a rule at one time that pics shouldn't be applied while the entry was in PR - but that's been relaxed somewhat recently. I've spoken to the (current) Ed and he had no problem with pics in PR, so long as they're already on the system and relevant. I'd say the cuttlefish photo is, smiley - smiley


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Post 9

Lanzababy - Guide Editor

Yay - Okay, photo inserted. Now, I don't know how to credit Foxwing though?


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Post 10

Devonseaglass

I've always considered pigeons to be particularly stupid, apart from the part of the brain that has a GPS receiver embedded inside. smiley - run


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Post 11

Devonseaglass

Here is an example; http://video.aol.co.uk/video-detail/extreme-stupidity-of-pigeon-check-this-out/33646694


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Post 12

Lanzababy - Guide Editor

smiley - laugh Absolutely. It's just that the source I read quoted pigeons. I know that racing pigeons are quite clever, but they didn't specify. Mind you, we have a form of pigeon on Lanzarote called a Barbary Dove. They are quite clever - they approach anyone eating breakfast on their balconies, and look cute and coo and so on. They usually get bits of toast or croissant for their efforts.

...and thanks for reading DSG smiley - ok


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Post 13

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

<>
All you had to do was copy the code on my entry, (but the credit won't appear until the entry is edited, remember)


after the tag:


Foxwing

(outside of your references tags)
and then your tag


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Post 14

Devonseaglass

It was an interesting read. Not sure Southernmost should be capitalised...but, if it should be, I've learned something else today. smiley - ok


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Post 15

Lanzababy - Guide Editor

Thanks GB , I've added the credit now.

dsg - actually I didn't know either, and have just checked in a dictionary.

smiley - biro southernmost changed smiley - ok


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Post 16

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

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no, it shouldn'tsmiley - ok

South Polesmiley - biro
Southern Hemispheresmiley - biro
southernmost (adjective)smiley - biro


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Post 17

Lanzababy - Guide Editor

smiley - simpost


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Post 18

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - biggrinyou're welcome lanzababy, and smiley - dohI'll smiley - zoom off now and leave you to answer your reviewerssmiley - run


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Post 19

Lanzababy - Guide Editor

Gnomon has just offered me a wonderful photo of a cuttlefish showing display stripes - rather than in camouflage, taken by foxwing.

I'm just making a note here in the PR thread for future reference.

Maybe it would be possible to use both?


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Post 20

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

The Eds would be happy to accommodate both. They allowed me to use *all* the asterisms BLOBs on my asterism entry smiley - smiley


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