h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Opinions please!!

Chris

This is a fine introduction to Spurs, and as it stands, it meets all the criteria of an Edited Guide. It's succinct and fact-rich - nice! However, one could argue that it's a tad on the short side and my suggestion is, if possible, for you to add a couple of extra (possibly anecdotal) paragraphs. For example, the era of Ossie Ardilles and Ricky Villa springs to mind, especially how they were recieved by the fans during the Falklands Conflict. Or you could talk a little about the club's Jewish connections. What do you reckon? You can put it in to Peer Review now, cool... or you can just beef it up that little bit more. I think this would make it a great entry.

Cheers,

Sam.

Hi Sam

Thanks for your opinions. I was worried about making it too in-depth as it was my first Entry and I didn't know how much detail it was worth putting in to start with. Having browsed the Guide a bit more I have seen that the more detail, the better seems to be the rule.

I'll add to the Entry when time allows and will definitely bear in mind what you've said

Chris

Excellent news! I look forward to seeing it in the Edited Guide.

Sam.

Excellent news! I look forward to seeing it in the Edited Guide.

Sam.

Editorial Note: This conversation has been moved from 'The Writing Workshop' to 'The Flea Market'.

I'll take this up, then; something to tinker with

A second version was: A695252 Tottenham Hotspur FC
However this did not make Peer Review.
A related entry can be found here:
A3677259 Tottenham Hotspur - aka Living a Life of Disappointment
This version was in the Writing Workshop before withdrawal.

Are there no Spurs fans around who could possibly combine the best of both?

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