h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A575318 - The Tulip

Heys guys check it out and tel me what you think.

Rama

IMHO there's just two points: - it's a bit laborious, flipping back and forth between footnotes and the list at the top. Better if you include the footnotes into the bullet list. - the title is somewhat misleading. I was expecting to read something about Holland and flowers. You should choose a more descriptive one. Other than that: a useful entry :-) Your experience might also be useful for this one (about cigarette papers): http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/F57153?thread=114513 and there's a Peer Review thread about how to roll a joint, at http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/F48874?thread=79767 Remember: Peer Review and Writing-Workshop are there for fellow researchers to throw in their 2p :-) Bossel (Scout)

hmm, perhaps you leave your here

Editorial Note: This conversation has been moved from 'The Writing Workshop' to 'The Flea Market'.

...the author appears to have 'left the building'.

I'm here