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fluorescent Started conversation May 1, 2001
That is very powerful writing. I really loved it. It totally consumes the reader, drags you in and holds your attention right until the end.
I did guess that Chris was the perpertrator...but maybe you're meant to suspect that?
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Emily 'Twa Bui' Ultramarine Posted May 12, 2001
Thank you...
Now about Chris - to tell the truth, you aren't meant to suspect him, but I wrote this for the optional exam in creative writing for English Lit. A-level, and I didn't have time to rewrite it quite as I would have liked. When I get round to it, I'm thinking of adding a few more characters to allay suspicion, as well as expanding on Nell and particularly Chris, so that he isn't just the 'Hi, it's me, I'm guilty because I serve no other real purpose in the plot' character.
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ex-Rambling. Thingite. Dog. Pythonist. Deceased. Posted Aug 31, 2001
reminds me of that old movie Pacific Heights, with Micheal Keaton as the tennant from hell. Mayyhem for profit; with a nice sociopathic touch to it.
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Emily 'Twa Bui' Ultramarine Posted Sep 6, 2001
Hey - no one's ever told me my stories were sociopathic before... 
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Emily 'Twa Bui' Ultramarine Posted Sep 6, 2001
Though with regard to your nickname - 
s rule, 
s drool. Quite literally. 
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