A Conversation for Söderköping, Sweden

A492987 - Söderköping, Sweden

Post 1

Fridday

http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A492987

This thread is very good for people/tourists who plan to visit this place.


A492987 - Söderköping, Sweden

Post 2

Merdo the Grey, Patron Saint of fuzzy thinking

Shades of "F*****g Åmål" (that's not English profanity, but Swedish cultural expression for F*****g)

Yes, yes, YES, I loved it!
smiley - oksmiley - oksmiley - oksmiley - oksmiley - oksmiley - ok

~^M^~erdo


A492987 - Söderköping, Sweden

Post 3

Crescent

A good Entry smiley - smiley And it should have no major hurdles with Peer Review smiley - smiley So, there is nothing else at all worth going there for? smiley - smiley As I said good Entry Fridday smiley - smiley Until later....
BCNU - Crescent


A492987 - Söderköping, Sweden

Post 4

Fridday

At least nothing worth speaking of...


A492987 - Söderköping, Sweden

Post 5

Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

Hi, all!

I tried recommending this one, but got word back from above that the entry is too negative and not balanced enough for the edited guide.

Basically, the consensus is that even if a town really seems to suck to the author, there must be something decent about it, otherwise everyone would have packed up and left ages ago.

Possible things to think about elaborating might be:

schools, churches, community groups, parks, cutesy little shops, town history, etc.

smiley - smiley
Mikey


A492987 - Söderköping, Sweden

Post 6

Inkwash

That's a shame.
I like the entry, and I know how hard it is to write something positive about dull places as I did a little entry about the town I study in.

Even so, I can understand why the powers that be don't want to see guide entries slating places, so either this one needs to be re-written as a more neutral account of Söderköping, or it should simply remain as an unedited entry that is still accessible to the H2G2 wanderer.
smiley - smiley


A492987 - Söderköping, Sweden

Post 7

Fridday

Yeah, I made some updates so it would be more, ehm, objective.


A492987 - Söderköping, Sweden

Post 8

Martin Harper

A few nitpicks and comments...

: the old lock - perhaps you could tell us why it is there in a footnote or something. Sorta like "oh go on then - it's because they bought one from Nebraska, and didn't realise they needed a Canal too".

: Smultronstället - Icecream - tell me more! smiley - biggrin

: Söderköpings brunn - Restaurant Food - tell me more! smiley - wow

There's other stuff I might ask - what do teenagers and general youths do for fun? Do they hang round anywhere in particular (eg, where I live atm, everyone under 25 hangs round the outside of the Pizza-Bowl looking bored). Are there buses anywhere more exciting that people take?

I dunno - you've managed to say a bit more - but I do wonder if there's more you might say. What do you think?


A492987 - Söderköping, Sweden

Post 9

Fridday

Ok, so I made some changes. For the better? Maybe, maybe not.


A492987 - Söderköping, Sweden

Post 10

Martin Harper

Well, I think for the better - but only you can decide! smiley - smiley

One thing I do wonder is if you might want to work a few of the footnotes back into the text - they have a tendency to interupt the flow of guide entries, I find. But that's a stylistic issue, so it's really up to you.

Excellent! I for one think this is Edited quality material - now we just have to wait for someone to pick it!


A492987 - Söderköping, Sweden

Post 11

Fridday

I happen to like the footnotes... But seriously, I hope, for Söderköpings sake, that it will some day become edited.


A492987 - Söderköping, Sweden

Post 12

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

yeah, I hope so too. You are not forgotten smiley - winkeye


Bossel (Scout)


A492987 - Söderköping, Sweden

Post 13

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

See what happens smiley - smiley

Congratulations! smiley - bubbly

You'll be pleased to hear that your entry has been approved for inclusion into the Edited Guide! Good work!

What will happen next is that your entry will be assigned to a subeditor who will do some editing and checking. Once this process has finished (please be patient, it takes a little while), your entry will then appear on the front page and be part of the Edited Guide. When that glorious day comes, you'll receive an email letting you know.


Have another smiley - bubblysmiley - smiley

Bossel (Scout)


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Post 14

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Editorial Note: This conversation has been moved from 'Peer Review' to 'Söderköping, Sweden'.

This thread has been moved out of the Peer Review Forum because this entry has now been recommended for the Edited Guide.

If they haven't been along already, the Scout who recommended your entry will post here soon, to let you know what happens next. Meanwhile you can find out what will happen to your entry here: http://www.h2g2.com/SubEditors-Process

Congratulations!


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Post 15

Fridday

Great! Not much more to say, really. Thank you.


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