A Conversation for A paradelle a difficult French poetic form

Interesting writing

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Goldylock

Did you write these yourself? Some very powerful poetry here.


Interesting writing

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logicus tracticus philosophicus

Cheers goldylock yes...not first written to the form..apart from the triolette adaphted the parradelles from lines used in another work..
http://www.morewriting.co.uk/user/10/
is on place you'd find more and indeed may be some answers to other Questions raised (re unsolicited scripts with any success) a few of the beeb members(getwriting) ended up there or "editred" and "writersdock" googling them should find them easy enough...did look round "writerscafe" myself not so long ago.....

lucky saw you comment as not on site as much these days bandwidth restrictions..

will leave you with latest scribblings..

Influence flew, of what thoughts you knew.
As told to you, as if the words were true
I stumble about in your words
were sounds much simpler heard
Long gone nights; here, were we awoke
soaked confused in dark hidden mysteries.
That was never ever must be spoke: had
Scene: Cartwheels turned along rutted road,
words stumble about in our worlds
roved in sod that failed to dry, they rode
In roove to reeve path improve indeed
seep bitter tears: from a sacramental task.
*********************************************************
Smirking in the corner,
so posed.
You juxtapose.

One may see shied smile,
Taught-
-By time exposed.




Interesting writing

Post 3

Goldylock

I've registered at the writing site you mentioned, also as Goldylock.
Thanks for the info. smiley - bubbly


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