A Conversation for Help Page Update - *Writing for the Edited Guide*

A18584058 - Writing for the Edited Guide (Subbed version)

Post 41

AlexAshman


Righto, I've gone ahead and updated all the lists of Entries. I've included all the Entries of the Month, plus some others that turned up in the shortlists.


A18584058 - Writing for the Edited Guide (Subbed version)

Post 42

AlexAshman


Entry: Writing for the Edited Guide (Subbed version) - A18584058
Author: Alex Tufty Ashman [!] - U566116


A18584058 - Writing for the Edited Guide (Subbed version)

Post 43

Icy North

Looks good smiley - smiley

I'm glad Metaphysical Isms made an appearance smiley - ok


A18584058 - Writing for the Edited Guide (Subbed version)

Post 44

AlexAshman


Me too, though I'll happily remove it if anyone objects to my self-referencing.


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Post 45

Gnomon - time to move on

If it's been voted as Entry of the Month, then I don't think they've a right to object to your self-referencing.


A18584058 - Writing for the Edited Guide (Subbed version)

Post 46

AlexAshman


No, it was one of the "others that turned up in the shortlists."


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Post 47

U168592

I've no objections. Well, actually I object to wearing socks with sandals, but as far as this Entry is concerned I think it's top ho old bean, but how do we go about getting it there? It's really an Update of a Help Page, so should it be picked by a Scout? Not really...

I think it might need an actual email to the Eds once everyone is happy - what say you?


A18584058 - Writing for the Edited Guide (Subbed version)

Post 48

AlexAshman


Yep, I think an email would be in order.

I'll stop making changes, but is everyone happy with this?


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Post 49

Gnomon - time to move on

Two things:

1200 words --> 1,200 words

I'm not sure that "Envy-Free Cake Division" is appropriate as an example of a succinct entry. It's over 2,000 words long!


A18584058 - Writing for the Edited Guide (Subbed version)

Post 50

AlexAshman


Oops. I think I may have put it in the wrong section.

Fixed smiley - cheers


A18584058 - Writing for the Edited Guide (Subbed version)

Post 51

Gnomon - time to move on

I'm happy with this now, Alex.


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Post 52

Icy North

Not succinct? You should have seen the first draft smiley - winkeye

Looks fine to me, Alex smiley - ok


A18584058 - Writing for the Edited Guide (Subbed version)

Post 53

AlexAshman

Right, I've sent an email to the Editors: Dear h2g2 Editors Back in May I decided to 'sub-edit' one of the help pages - http://www.h2g2.com/Writing-Guidelines . I did so without altering the meaning of the guidelines, though I have reduced the wordiness (1,830 words --> 1,727 words), reordered the guidelines into four clear sections, and replaced the example Entries with recent ones (including all the new Entries of the Month). The Entry can be found at http://www.h2g2.com/A18584058 and the Peer Review thread is at http://www.h2g2.com/F48874?thread=5475211 (though the first page is mostly tangents). I'd be very grateful indeed if you might consider replacing the existing version with the update. Many thanks, Alex Ashman U566116


A18584058 - Writing for the Edited Guide (Subbed version)

Post 54

Gnomon - time to move on

smiley - ok


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Post 55

AlexAshman


Writing-Guidelines smiley - spacesmiley - biggrin

(smiley - cheers Eds)


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Post 56

h5ringer

At last. Well done Alex smiley - magic


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Post 57

Gnomon - time to move on

Woohoo! and one of mine is in there as an example of a really well-researched Entry (The Decipherment of Linear B).smiley - cool


A18584058 - Writing for the Edited Guide (Subbed version)

Post 58

Icy North

I haven't the heart to tell Alex, but one of mine was copied from the back of a cornflakes packet. smiley - winkeye


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Post 59

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned


smiley - bigeyes

WooHoo! smiley - biggrin


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Post 60

Malabarista - now with added pony

smiley - laugh And the vampire one wasn't a labour of love, it was my Uni paper, translated and slightly reworded smiley - winkeye

But well done, Alex! smiley - biggrin It was about time.

smiley - disco


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