A Conversation for GG: The French Pyrenees

A1315766 - The French Pyrenees

Post 21

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

Entry looks great, Gnomon. I don't know the area, but you sell it well! smiley - biggrin

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


A1315766 - The French Pyrenees

Post 22

frenchbean

Hi Gnomon smiley - smiley

I think this is a great entry. It makes me want to go and explore the area.

How do we know that the Niaux Cave Paintings ? I know that's pedantic, but the sentence seems a bit glib and out of kilter with the rest of the writing. smiley - erm

<..there is Skiing in the Pyrenees> I'm not sure there should be a capital S there?

When was Villefranche do Conflent built to withstand cannon fire? And why was it being attacked?

smiley - cheers
F/b


A1315766 - The French Pyrenees

Post 23

Gnomon - time to move on

Good points, Frenchbean! I've corrected Skiing, I've changed the statement about the painting looking fresh and I've added some more info about Villefranche.


A1315766 - The French Pyrenees

Post 24

frenchbean

Looking good smiley - biggrin
And the conclusion's good now.

smiley - cheers
F/b


A1315766 - The French Pyrenees

Post 25

Judge Mental

Reading this makes me want to book a flight to the French Pyrenees - what more can I say? smiley - smiley

I only picked up on two things. You've managed to get the accent's over the e's in Pyrenees every time... except in the title line. Is this because it's not possible to put in the special letters there, or a small oversight?

Secondly, in the section on Biarritz, I reckon it'd read more smoothly if you wrote "so it is no longer", instead of "so it is not now".

Anyway - must go. Want to book that flight...

Judge smiley - smiley


A1315766 - The French Pyrenees

Post 26

Gnomon - time to move on

I deliberately left out the accents in the title line because it causes problems when the entry appears on the Front Page.

I'll make that change you suggested about 'no longer'.


A1315766 - The French Pyrenees

Post 27

R'win

Thought you'd like to know this has been accepted for inclusion in the Edited Guide.
Well done


A1315766 - The French Pyrenees

Post 28

frenchbean

Congratulations!
smiley - bubbly

smiley - cheers
F/b


A1315766 - The French Pyrenees

Post 29

Gnomon - time to move on

Hurray! smiley - bubbly

Thanks, everyone, for your comments and suggestions.


A1315766 - The French Pyrenees

Post 30

Spiff


well, mutual congrats, then, smiley - bubbly

I hope it should be easy to inter-link this with my Cassoulet job... I only wrote it for that purpose! smiley - biggrin

Anyway, this is a rather more ambitious effort, and a fine addition to the 'hitch-hikers' side of the guide, smiley - ok

cya
spiff


A1315766 - The French Pyrenees

Post 31

Gnomon - time to move on

As soon as a 'Recommended' version of your Cassoulet entry becomes available, I'll put a note here asking the Sub-editor to link to it.


A1315766 - The French Pyrenees

Post 32

Rho

The Recommended versions of these entries haven't yet been allocated to Subeditors, but their A-numbers are, and will remain, A1920539 and A1920557. smiley - smiley

Rho


Key: Complain about this post

More Conversations for GG: The French Pyrenees

Write an Entry

"The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy is a wholly remarkable book. It has been compiled and recompiled many times and under many different editorships. It contains contributions from countless numbers of travellers and researchers."

Write an entry
Read more