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Some minor nitpicks

Post 21

iaoth

ARGH. smiley - sadface I love how the graph looks -- very smiley - cool, but it's factually incorrect! According to the text, the sigmoidal should be the yellow curve, but in the graph it's orange. The converse is true for the exponential curve; orange text, yellow curve.

And it was such a nice graph too.

Plus another nitpick. smiley - smiley The added paragraph should say "graph below", since the graph is in fact directly below it.

I think this Entry is cursed. It will never make it through editing... oooOoooOOOoh smiley - ghost


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Post 22

Ashley


The entry is not cursed - just requires a little more work... something that usually happens when an entry is written by several people on a subject that is quite intricate. smiley - smiley

One of the beauties of the Guide is that we can get feed back so the entry will be spot on when it enters the Official Guide. smiley - biggrin

I'll let the artist know.

Ashley


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Post 23

iaoth

Thanks for the comforting words... smiley - smiley

I still think it's cursed though. OooOOOOOooooOoOOOOoooOoOoooh smiley - ghost

Nah. Actually, I just like the ghost smiley. smiley - biggrin


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Post 24

iaoth

Hmm. Is it "gray" or "grey" in Great Britannia? smiley - erm I just discovered that the Entry is inconsistent. It says both "grey goo" and "gray goo".


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Post 25

Ashley


And now... smiley - smiley

Graph and Gray/Grey problem *should* be ok now...

*should* being the mot de jour


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Post 26

iaoth

Gray/Grey is fixed, but alas, the graph still shows exactly the same error as the previous graph. But do not despair! Since it is the ~background~ colour that show which curve is which this time, even an inept artist such as myself can fix it. I'll make a new version of this image, showing exactly how it should look. That way, there should be no confusion at all -- "should" still being the mot du jour, it still being the same day and all.


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Post 27

iaoth

Here's a link to a link page that links to the image...

http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A562394


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Post 28

iaoth

For the record, the only change I made was swap the words "Sigmoidal" and "Exponential".


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Post 29

Ashley


And now? smiley - smiley


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Post 30

iaoth

That was fast!! smiley - wow Yes, that's it exactly! I do believe the Entry is perfect now, or at least subjectively so... smiley - winkeye

smiley - yikes This must mean it's ready for the front page!!


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Post 31

Ashley



it'll be there in a couple of days....


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Post 32

iaoth

smiley - yikessmiley - wow <-- ambivalence


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