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This entry describes perfectly everything a visitor to Rottenburg has to know in an ironic way. The only disadvantage is that its topic is unbelievably unimportant.

Well, I know where I'll be going on holiday next year then! Biggest Romanian Toilette north of the mountains? Sounds great. But maybe it should be "Roman Toilet". There may be a bigger Romanian Toilette in Bucharest - or am I thinking of the wrong mountains?



-Dan-

You're off to a flying start... but you need to add some more information to this Entry. Have a look at the Entry on Aachen, for example:

http://www.h2g2.com/A356898

You don't need to write a whole book about Rottenburg, but it may be helpful to plan your Entry in sections. If you write about different aspects of life in Rottenburg (the geography, the people, the climate, public toilets, food...) you will soon have a fairly long and comprehensive article. Try to capture the essence of what it is like to actually be there. If I were suddenly to find myself standing on a street in Rottenburg, what would the experience be like?

JTG

Sorry, my English sucks.

It's far better than my German.

Anyway, don't be discouraged... This could be the start of a great Entry.

JTG

I agree with John - this is a great start, you just need a little more to get it over the hump.

Should we consider moving this one to the Writer's Workshop? The entry, while interesting, definitely needs some more development. Unfortunately, the author of the entry does not seem to have used h2g2 since sometime last August.

Mikey

I'd go along with that...

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